高考英語(yǔ)作文的提分技巧
眾所周知,作文中出現(xiàn)過多的簡(jiǎn)單句會(huì)給人單調(diào)乏味之感,句子與句子之間的關(guān)系也會(huì)顯得松散;而文章中過多地出現(xiàn)復(fù)合句又顯得累贅,讀起來(lái)費(fèi)勁。恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更緊湊,表達(dá)更流暢。
1.運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換簡(jiǎn)單句
寫作時(shí),我們可以利用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞將兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句轉(zhuǎn)換成較高級(jí)的表達(dá)方式。轉(zhuǎn)換時(shí)可采用三步法。
第一步:寫出兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句。
第二步:讓句②作主句,用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞改寫句①。
第三步:句①表示原因,其中的動(dòng)詞feel與主語(yǔ)I之間為主謂關(guān)系,故用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作原因狀語(yǔ),即Feeling quite sorry for that,I begin to think about what to do to help.
【舉一反三】
、倭硪环矫,我將幫著建立英語(yǔ)角,給我們學(xué)生提供一個(gè)練習(xí)英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)的`平臺(tái)。
翻譯:On the other hand,I will help set up an English corner. I will provide us students with a platform to practice our oral English.
可用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)將其轉(zhuǎn)換為→On the other hand,I will help set up an English corner,providing us students with a platform to practice our oral English.
、谶@里的人都喜歡湯姆寫的那本小說。
翻譯:All the people here like the novel. It is written by Tom.
可用過去分詞作定語(yǔ)將其轉(zhuǎn)換為→All the people here like the novel written by Tom.
2.運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句
用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句比轉(zhuǎn)換簡(jiǎn)單句要容易一些,因?yàn)樾柁D(zhuǎn)換的一般是從句部分,這時(shí)只需要判斷用何種非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞,再把握好時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)即可。
第一步:寫出復(fù)合句。
例如:
After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months,we strongly desired to be the winner.
第二步:用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)代替after引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句,practice與we之間為主謂關(guān)系,且表示完成,故用現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式作狀語(yǔ),即Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months,we strongly desired to be the winner.
【舉一反三】
、袤@詫于他們的熟練程度,我決心要像他們一樣好。
翻譯:Because I was amazed at how skillful they were,I determined to be just as good.
用過去分詞作狀語(yǔ)將其轉(zhuǎn)換為→Amazed at how skillful they were,I determined to be just as good.
、诳吹揭惠v車朝她飛馳而來(lái),我伸出手把她拉了回來(lái)。
翻譯:When I saw a car running towards her,I reached my hand out and pulled her back.
用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)將其轉(zhuǎn)換為→Seeing a car running towards her,I reached my hand out and pulled her back.
、圻@里曾有一家生產(chǎn)化肥的工廠。它每天釋放出大量有毒氣體,污染環(huán)境。
翻譯:There was a factory here,which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas,which polluted the environment.
將第二個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句轉(zhuǎn)換為現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)→There was a factory here,which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas,polluting the environment.
④由于老師的幫助,我的英語(yǔ)進(jìn)步很大。
翻譯:Because my teacher helps me,my English has greatly improved.
用”with+賓語(yǔ)+現(xiàn)在分詞”的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)將其轉(zhuǎn)換為→With my teacher helping me,my English has greatly improved.
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