A Field Trip
It is a nice day. Our class will have a field trip today. The classmates are very excited. Look! Here we are. There’re a lot of activities to do. Amy is watching insects. Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write a report. Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some of the classmates are having a picnic. There is a lot of delicious food to eat. Oh, who’s that over there? It’s Miss White. What is she doing? She is taking photos. We had a very good time. I’ll never forget this field trip.
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寫法:這篇習作是按照郊游時的畫面來描述的,記敘了同學們分別在郊游中做了哪些活動及郊游的感受。
時態(tài):這篇文章可以用一般過去時和現(xiàn)在進行時來寫。由于本單元主要講的是現(xiàn)在進行時,所以,這里我們采用現(xiàn)在進行時比較合適。
句型: ××. is/are doing sth. She /He is doing sth. They’re doing sth.
注意:活動的相關(guān)表述法采用新舊知識相結(jié)合去寫。注意時態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換、描寫感受時用一般現(xiàn)在時。
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