高考英語滿分作文和范文

　　假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時(shí)回復(fù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)雙下要點(diǎn)給他回封郵件：

　　1. 未及時(shí)回信的原因;

　　2. 你假期的打算(如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等)

　　注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120-150;

　　2 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　【參考范文】

　　Dear Tom,

　　How are you doing? You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation. I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay. How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study, for which I am very sorry. I hope you can understand me.

　　During the holiday, I am going to do a part-time job. On the one hand, I can earn some money to reduce the burden of my family. On the other hand, I accumulate the social experience, which does good to my future life. At the same time, I will not forget to go over my lesson. I will spend a instructive holiday. How will you spend your holiday? I hope you have a good time.

　　These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.

　　Yours,

　　Lin Hua

　　這篇英語作文比較簡(jiǎn)單，只要平時(shí)作文基礎(chǔ)和英語單詞扎實(shí)，就能取得一個(gè)不錯(cuò)的分?jǐn)?shù)，跟優(yōu)秀的英語范文相比較，你的作文有哪些不足呢。

　　北京卷高考英語作文：開放作文范文

　　北京卷高考英語開放作文題目：

　　請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。

　　In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

　　北京卷高考英語開放作文范文

　　In the picture, there stands a tree full of fruit on one side of the stream. Across the stream, a man is trying to reach out on the edge of the band for the fruit with a net attached to a pole. Not far away there is a bridge that can lead him to the tree for more fruit.

　　The message conveyed in the picture is clear. In pursuing a dream, we might focus on only one say of making it come true, forgetting that there may be alternatives. As indicated in the picture, if the man is willing to look for other possibilities, he can find a better and more rewarding way to achieve his goal. All he has to do is to turn around, cross the bridge and walk to the tree.

　　山東高考英語滿分作文范文

　　【考題再現(xiàn)】

　　第二節(jié)：寫作(滿分30分)

　　假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時(shí)回復(fù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回郵件：

　　1. 未及時(shí)回復(fù)的原因;

　　2. 你假期的打算(如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等)。

　　注意： 1. 次數(shù)：120~150;

　　2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　【試題點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　今年的書面表達(dá)題目延續(xù)山東省一貫的提綱作文命題習(xí)慣，時(shí)隔一年之后重新回到“書信題”的大框架中，考了一篇“以道歉信為外衣，以活動(dòng)安排為主體段”的提綱作文，相當(dāng)于10年山東卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)和合體。這種作文是我們平時(shí)經(jīng)常練習(xí)的，因此套路很完善、套話很豐富。此外，本文中需要同學(xué)們翻譯的難句不多，因此，只要在備考過程中有意識(shí)地了解過高考英語作文的提分方法，掌握了常用的亮點(diǎn)詞匯、加分句型和過渡詞，并加以針對(duì)性訓(xùn)練，這道題目應(yīng)該不難寫。

　　【經(jīng)典套路】

　　第一段：?jiǎn)柡?寫信背景+寫信目的

　　第二段：“道歉”部分(相當(dāng)于“寫信背景”)

　　第三段：“假期安排”部分

　　第四段：補(bǔ)充說明+客套話

　　【高分范文】

　　Dear Tom,

　　How are you doing? (問候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(寫信背景) I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(寫信目的)

　　How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段為道歉信常見套路)

　　By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主題句) First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1) Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)

　　These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套話結(jié)尾)

　　全國(guó)新課標(biāo)(卷II)2016年高考英語滿分作文范文

　　假定你是李華，自制了一些中國(guó)結(jié)(Chinese knot)。給開網(wǎng)店的美國(guó)朋友Tom寫封信，請(qǐng)他代賣，要點(diǎn)包括：

　　1. 外觀(尺寸、顏色、材料)

　　2. 象征意義

　　3. 價(jià)格

　　注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

　　2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

　　3. 開頭已為你寫好。

　　Dear Tom,

　　How are you doing?I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!

　　高考英語滿分作文范文

　　假定你是李華。請(qǐng)你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會(huì)，帶去他想要的那幅中國(guó)畫，同時(shí)詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說明：

　　李明：高個(gè)子，戴眼鏡

　　航班號(hào)：CA985

　　到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30

　　注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

　　2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

　　3. 開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

　　Dear Peter,

　　How are you doing?

　　I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.

　　Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!

　　His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

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