6級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文范文

1. 考查學(xué)生綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力。本題相對(duì)比較容易，因?yàn)轭}目中提供了比較具體的情景，而且是學(xué)生常見(jiàn)的語(yǔ)言情景。但要注意表達(dá)要點(diǎn)要全面，寫(xiě)本文的要點(diǎn)基本包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1.討論

2.爬山

3.撿拾別人(或收拾自己)的垃圾

4.投放垃圾

還要注意表達(dá)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)時(shí)要使用豐富多樣的表達(dá)方式。包括詞匯多樣、句法多樣，段落結(jié)構(gòu)多樣。也要注意描述事實(shí)和議論的結(jié)合，不能只描述事實(shí)而忽視議論。以上是本題獲得高分?jǐn)?shù)的關(guān)鍵。請(qǐng)參考下列范文：

Last Thursday, we had a clameeting to discuwhere to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

We were tired but happy.

2.

馬虎搞到兩張全興隊(duì)對(duì)國(guó)安隊(duì)的足球比賽入場(chǎng)券。他電話通知好友趙華洋，約他放學(xué)后在新華公園門口碰頭，一起吃晚飯，然后去看球賽。二人在飯店美美吃了一頓，到付賬時(shí)馬虎才發(fā)現(xiàn)自己把錢夾忘在了家里，入場(chǎng)券也在他的錢夾中。

Ma Hu got two tickets of (1) a wonderful football match between Quanxing and Guoan. He was thinking of invite (2) his good friend Zhao Huayang to watch it together. He gave him a call and told him to meet at the gate of Xinhua Park after claand then had dinner (3) together.

They met each other on time and had good dinner (4) in a restaurant. When the waiter brought them the bill. Ma Hu found that he left (5) his wallet at home. The two tickets kept (6) in the wallet, too.

(1)of在這里不是表示所有關(guān)系，所以應(yīng)把of改成for，表示"用途"。

(2)動(dòng)詞invite在介詞of的后面，應(yīng)把它變?yōu)?ing形式。

(3)連詞and連接的應(yīng)該是兩個(gè)并列的動(dòng)詞不定式，所以應(yīng)把had改為to have。

(4)這里注意dinner前面有形容詞修飾時(shí)，那么應(yīng)在形容詞前面加a。

(5)應(yīng)把left改成had left。因?yàn)榈?發(fā)現(xiàn)"時(shí)為止前面的動(dòng)作已經(jīng)完成，要用過(guò)去完成時(shí)態(tài)。

(6)此處是被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，應(yīng)加上were。

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